ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC34 N1xxx

ISO/IEC JTC1/SC34/WG2 N430

ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC34

Information Technology --
Document Description and Processing Languages

TITLE: Editing memo of ISO/IEC 9541-1, 2 and 3, 2nd ed.
SOURCE: Project editors
PROJECT: All WG2 Projects
PROJECT EDITOR:
STATUS: Document for SC34 meeting in Brasilia
ACTION: For information
DATE: 2012-06-25
DISTRIBUTION: SC34, SC34/WG2 and Liaisons
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Editing memo of ISO/IEC 9541-1, 2 and 3, 2nd ed.>

As shown in SC34/WG2 N429 (Result of voting on ISO/IEC FDIS 9541-1, 2 and 3, 2nd ed.), there were no comments on the FDIS texts provided from any national bodies except ITTF. Project editors reviewed the ITTF comments and made the following dispositions:

Re all parts

1. Delete all text before the Contents (ITTF prepares the cover page and copyright notice).
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2. In the Foreword, 4th paragraph, start a new paragraph after "... patent rights."
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3. In the Foreword, 5th paragraph, add the following sentence after "... minor revision.": "It also includes an editorial change of syntax to XML (DSDL, ISO/IEC 19757-2) from SGML/DTD and ASN.1."
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4. Delete the last paragraph of the Introduction.
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5. Replace the introductory paragraph in the Normative references clause with the following: "The following referenced documents are indispensable for the application of this document. For dated references, only the edition cited applies. For undated references, the latest edition of the referenced document (including any amendments) applies.".
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6. Change the title of the Definitions clause to "Terms and definitions".
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Re Part 1

1. In Clause 1, line 1: Replace "ant" with "any".
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2. In principle, normative references must be to the latest edition of a standard. ISO 646:1983, ISO 3166:1988, and ISO 6523:1984 have been cancelled and replaced by ISO 646:1991, ISO 3166-1:2006, and ISO/IEC 6523-1:1998 + ISO/IEC 6523-2:1998, respectively. In each case, the latest edition should be given in Clause 2.
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3. In Clause 2, replace the title of ISO/IEC 10036:1996 with: " Information technology -- Font information interchange -- Procedures for registration of font-related identifiers".
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4. Replace the first sentence of Clause 3 with the following: "For the purposes of this document, the following terms and definitions apply.".
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5. In 3.6, replace "Bald" with "Bold".
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6. In 3.10, replace the first occurrence of "representation" with "representations".
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7. In 3.16, delete the first occurrence of "The".
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8. In 3.22, replace "appear" with "appears".
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9. In 3.26, replace " with '.
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10. In 3.30, replace "are" with "area".
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11. In 3.35 and 3.36, convert the second sentence to a NOTE below the definition.
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12. Add Boldface to titles of Figures 8, 9, 10.
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13. Add Boldface to titles of Figures D1 to D8.
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14. Replace D1, D2, etc. with D.1 D.2, etc. in titles of Figures D1 to D8.
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Re Part 2

1. In Clause 1, paragraph 4, replace "algorithms is recognized" with "algorithms are recognized" OR "algorithm is recognized", as appropriate.
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2. In Clause 2, paragraphs 1 and 2, delete "this part of ISO/IEC 9541, " (4 occurrences).
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Re Part 3

1. In subclause 1.1, paragraph 3, replace "park 1 and 2 of ISO/IEC 9541" with "ISO/IEC 9541-1 and ISO/IEC 9541-2".
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2. In subclause 1.3, replace the title of ISO/IEC 10036:1996 with: " Information technology -- Font information interchange -- Procedures for registration of font-related identifiers".
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